🔥 CHAPTER 9: The Fire Finale
Amy tried to pay quickly, but Ethan noticed a dessert on
fire at another table.
“Bro! They’re on fire! We gotta help!”
Before anyone could stop him, he grabbed the flaming crème
brûlée torch from the waiter’s tray.
Ray screamed, “BURN THE GERMIES!”
He spun around like a flamethrower.
Tablecloths ignited. A napkin combusted. Lucy’s hair almost
caught fire before Amy dumped a glass of water over her.
Ethan yelled, “I WAS HELPING!”
The manager sprinted over. “OUT. ALL OF YOU. NOW!”
Ray saluted with a breadstick. “It’s been an honor, sir.”
🚪 CHAPTER 10: Banned for
Life
The four of them were escorted out by two very tired
security guards.
Amy looked like she’d aged 20 years. Lucy’s hair was frizzy.
Ethan still had custard on his eyebrows.
Ray waved to the restaurant. “We’ll
come back when we’re rich!”
The manager yelled, “YOU WON’T!”
Ethan turned to Amy. “So… McNugget Town?”
Amy sighed. “Fine. At least they expect stupidity there.”
Ray pumped his fist. “LEZGOOOO! Fancy food is overrated
anyway!”
Lucy muttered, “You destroyed a chandelier.”
Ethan grinned. “Yeah, but we did it classily.”
Amy groaned. “Next time, I’m eating alone.”
🍽️ EPILOGUE: Yelp Review
by Amy
⭐☆☆☆☆
“Food was excellent. Ambiance was romantic. Would have been
a perfect evening — if not for two idiots who turned the dining room into a war
zone. They ordered snails, set the table on fire, and argued about ketchup
being a ‘fancy sauce.’ One of them tried to swordfight with a baguette. 10/10
comedy, 0/10 sanity.”
Ethan commented: “We gave it character 😎.”
Ray replied: “Best. Restaurant. Ever.”
THE END
LLoC Quotes
a dessert on fire ...“Bro! They’re on fire! We gotta help!”
“We’ll come back when we’re rich!” The manager yelled, “YOU WON’T!”
“So… McNugget Town?”... “Fine. At least they expect stupidity there.”
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