🐾 THE FINAL STRAW — THE GREAT ESCAPE 🐾
Suddenly—
Sunny jumped off the table.
Hana followed.
Both sprinted into the back kitchen.
“NO NO NO NO NO—” Ethan cried, running after them.
Cherry flew after them.
Ray ran after Cherry.
Pikachu jumped off Lucy’s shoulder and toddled after Ray.
Lucy chased her hamster.
Amy carried Noodle like a baby and also ran.
The staff cried.
In the kitchen:
- Sunny
knocked flour everywhere.
- Hana
found the fish fridge.
- Cherry
landed in a bowl of powdered sugar (now he looked like a ghost).
- Pikachu
rolled in cocoa powder.
- Ray
slipped on spilled olive oil.
- Ethan
fell on Ray.
- Lucy
fell on Ethan.
- Amy
stayed standing somehow and yelled, “THIS IS WHY WE CAN’T HAVE NICE
THINGS!”
The manager walked in.
Stopped.
Stared at the destruction.
And quietly said:
“Please… calmly… never come back.”
🍪 THE AFTERMATH 🍪
Everyone sat outside on the curb.
Covered in flour, cream, sugar, and exhaustion.
Sunny purred smugly.
Hana ate stolen fish.
Cherry preened his newly white feathers.
Noodle curled in Amy’s lap like an innocent angel (she was
not).
Pikachu nibbled cake crumbs like nothing happened.
Ray sighed.
“That could’ve gone worse.”
Amy stared at him.
“How?”
Ethan shrugged.
“We could’ve brought Roar, Squeak, and Crunch?”
Everyone froze.
Lucy whispered, “Dear god.”
Noodle fainted.
END.
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“That could’ve gone worse.”...“How?”...“We could’ve brought Roar, Squeak, and Crunch?”
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